Frameworks, teardowns, and the thinking behind how MarketerX scores copy before you ship it.
Your offer isn't the problem. Your copy isn't the problem. The problem is what your prospect believes before they ever read your headline.
Most marketers ship copy and wait for the data to tell them whether it worked. The professionals score it before it ships. This is the Hemon Framework.
Your landing page is broken. Not because the headline is weak. Not because the CTA button is the wrong color. The page is broken structurally.